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i who trembled at the eternal blue by Piarvi-Recherreen i who trembled at the eternal blue by Piarvi-Recherreen
found poem, from a translation of "le bateau ivre" by arthur rimbaud

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:iconmatilda99:
matilda99 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
i like this a lot ... especially the background and the way you set/spaced certain words ...
i like the rhythm those words have ...resounding within in my head
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aerendial Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
rimbaud was such a player! :aww:
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
his "drunken boat" is my fave poem ever :faint:
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:iconaerendial:
aerendial Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
I'm going in search of it: :sprint:
:highfive:
after reading.. this was very catchy..
Where, suddenly dyeing the bluenesses, deliriums
And slow rhythms under the gleams of the daylight,
Stronger than alcohol, vaster than music
Ferment the bitter rednesses of love!
:ahoy:
....
I have seen archipelagos of stars! and islands
Whose delirious skies are open to sailor:
- Do you sleep, are you exiled in those bottomless nights,
Million golden birds, O Life Force of the future? -
.........................................
it is great!
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
yeah, pretty epic ... :faint:

i hope you can read it in french one day :lol: ... :boogie:
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aerendial Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
I hope so... I know it's much better... I could imagine.. voudrais simplement

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good night Pierreeeeeeeeeee
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
i guess that every poem in the world is always best in its original language, yeah :aww:

good night, kristijan :moon:
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LauraTringaliHolmes Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
Ah, lovely.
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
:aww:
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Morphine-Cloud Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
:boogie:
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DarkMagoo Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
breathtaking...
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
thankies, mag :aww:
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crissial Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
I miss the blue, heartbreaking, delirious moon who trembled at the eternal cold skies...
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
each version seems so romantic ... :)
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crissial Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
:heart:
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Corvidae65 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
I so love your found poetry Pierre henri :love:
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
thanks a lot, john :aww:
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Corvidae65 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
You're welcome :aww:
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
^__^
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piKulLP Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
you definitely capture the mood of the poem

. Genius use of space and color.
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
thank you so much for these nice words :aww:

did you already know the original poem ? :)
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:iconpikullp:
piKulLP Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
i must admit.. i do not.

would like to tho.
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Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
okay :aww:
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Nahuask Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
Juste sublime
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
merci, céline ... "le bateau ivre" encore :aww:
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Nahuask Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
Et j’espère bien qu'il y en aura d'autres !
Impossible de s'en lasser : )
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ScelusSceleris Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
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Featured because I just love your work.
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Bloody-Writing Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
Such strong and powerful words...
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Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
thank you :aww:
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lucietta Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
:)
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Greyguardian Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
"And again a thought, which wakes me up:
love is white and ignominious, wild
and heavy as a polar bear.

And again I start to be afraid -
on the north pole night, half year of a night,
the beginning of wandering
(...)"
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Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
ohhh i love these words, who wrote them ?

love as a polar bear, heavy and cold, wild and dangerous ... we know who these black and cold eyes belong too now ...

i first thought they belonged to a lonely, crying wolf, wandering in the winter forest ...
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Greyguardian Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
oh, so nice to hear. They belong to a youg polish poet i was fascinated by for some time (i think last year), - Sławomir Elsner. I belive i have translated a couple of his poems.


:whisper: the bears can be also nice and fluffy, like children's toys
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
oh, i've found on the internet that he was born in 1976, like me ... so yeah, a young man :nod:
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Greyguardian Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
Oui, Monsieur, justement!
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halcyonshores Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
.... :heart: ....
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love this.
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
thanks :aww:
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Markus43 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah Pierre!
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o-BlueMoon-o Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
:heart:
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Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
thankies, blue :aww:
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VampireVengeance Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist
Beautiful poetry! :heart:
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:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
thanks a lot :aww:
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